Rojo
Queen's Rider
There once was a girl who was told she could, and so she did.
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Post by Rojo on Mar 23, 2009 13:13:21 GMT 10
Title: Irony Rating: PG Prompt: "colour" Summary: Cleon's thoughts on colors
Cleon never could understand fief colors. What was the point, really? They did not protect anyone in battle; they did not earn favors at court. Besides, there were only so many colors to pick from, so some fiefs had to share. Some complexions did not go with some colors, so when certain lords or ladies came to court they always looked hideous.
But with some of them, came irony. As a squire, he had worn blue and cream livery, the colors of the Fief Mindelan. More importantly, they were Kel’s colors, when she was not dressed in the green and yellow (a combination he doubts even the gods could wear and make look good) uniform of Goldenlake. If she had to wear any clothing at all, he wishes they would be the colors of Kennan, of his fief.
He would prefer her wearing no clothing, though.
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Post by Fenella on Mar 23, 2009 14:44:12 GMT 10
Aw, it's kind of heartbreaking that Cleon walked around wearing Mindelan's colours for four years. I bet her family loved him, too.
Thanks for the insight into Cleon's thoughts (it's a place I don't venture alone...).
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Post by ubiquitous on Mar 23, 2009 15:45:37 GMT 10
Aww. Cute fic!
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Serenity
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The status is not quo.
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Post by Serenity on Mar 23, 2009 15:50:16 GMT 10
I never understood all the Cleon hate, so this fic makes me feel warm, fuzzy, and sympathetic (all at the same time!). Good job, and the last line is especially winsome.
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Post by girlcalledsun on Mar 23, 2009 17:58:54 GMT 10
I always really liked Cleon, too. He's just a good guy.
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Rojo
Queen's Rider
There once was a girl who was told she could, and so she did.
Posts: 660
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Post by Rojo on Mar 24, 2009 1:25:57 GMT 10
Thanks you guys!
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Post by Anaroriel on Mar 24, 2009 8:28:05 GMT 10
Ah, I agree. This drabble is lovely, and I always thought Cleon was a good guy too.
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Post by Lisa on Mar 24, 2009 12:07:27 GMT 10
This was delightfully Cleon-fuzzy, with the perfect balance of silliness and sweetness.
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Post by samantha on Mar 24, 2009 18:07:35 GMT 10
Aw Cleon. Such a sweetheart.
You've made me think of fief colours as being similar to school uniforms!
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Post by k4writer02 on Mar 30, 2009 7:06:16 GMT 10
Oh Cleon. I like that even though he's thinking about clothes, he's doing it in a very masculine way (particularly at the end). In a world that feels like it's mostly about the girls, it's nice to see the guys' pov too.
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