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Post by incarnadine on Aug 2, 2009 21:12:11 GMT 10
Title: Freedom Rating: G Prompt #8: Strange Bedfellows
She sees a glimpse of the girl she was, in Zaimid's child-bride. Bell-like laughter and blithe eyes. Only, to Sarai, Carthak is freedom, not an empress's gilded cage. They ride across the desert-strips bordering the summer-palace. Her veil slides off and she shrieks, spurring her horse faster on, unheedful of the other ladies-in-waiting. For a moment, the empress's heart twists.
But then Kalasin draws rein and rides back to her husband's side.
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Post by ubiquitous on Aug 2, 2009 22:43:54 GMT 10
Ooh, interesting pair. Nicely done!
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Post by Katty on Aug 3, 2009 20:23:01 GMT 10
Beautiful
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Post by aurorax on Aug 3, 2009 21:45:45 GMT 10
Wow, this is absolutely lovely, and you pack a lot of meaning into very few words. The "bell-like laughter and blithe eyes" description is beautifully done.
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