hawksandfeathers
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Post by hawksandfeathers on Apr 10, 2014 9:37:27 GMT 10
Title: Roses Rating: G Warnings: N/A Prompt: #13, Once Upon A Time Notes: Sleeping Beauty/Immortals AU, tbc.
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Her skin was white, her hair was spread about her like a classic painting of a saint, and her eyes... her eyes were closed. A tawny cat was curled on her chest, and surrounding everything was a haze of sparkling black magic. Roses would have completed the picture -- but there were none.
"Daine," the man whispered, "Of all the mundane spells in the world, she had to trap you with this one?" He bunched a hand inside his cloak and replayed the scene in his mind. "She will prick her finger on a porcupine's quill, and sleep... sleep for eternity."
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Post by wordy on Apr 11, 2014 8:30:55 GMT 10
This is fantastic - I love the use of a porcupine's quill!
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hawksandfeathers
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Post by hawksandfeathers on Apr 11, 2014 11:07:51 GMT 10
Thanks, wordy! It just popped into my head. I was like, Hey, that'll work in The Immortals 'verse!
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Post by max on Apr 12, 2014 10:07:37 GMT 10
I wouldn't have thought Sleeping Beauty for TIQ but it actually does work soooo well. This is really cool!
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Post by mistrali on Apr 12, 2014 10:53:01 GMT 10
Same. What a great moment to choose! And of course Ozorne would have porcupines in that menagerie of his - or are they native to Carthak?
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Post by hawksandfeathers on Apr 13, 2014 13:23:45 GMT 10
Thanks max and mistrali! I wasn't actually thinking of Ozorne here, the villain is Zhaneh Bitterclaws XD
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Post by mistrali on Apr 13, 2014 15:21:14 GMT 10
Oops. Well, apparently I can't read. This still works well, though!
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Post by max on Apr 13, 2014 15:32:02 GMT 10
Personally I liked that you left it ambiguous.
(And I actually assumed it was the Hag, for some vendetta of her own lol.)
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Post by Kris11 on May 4, 2014 3:12:26 GMT 10
I loved the descriptions, and really, the quill idea was brilliant. I am left wondering what happened next, if it was ever broken and how... which is good! <3
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Post by hawksandfeathers on May 5, 2014 11:34:00 GMT 10
Thanks Kris!!<3
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Post by Katty on Dec 10, 2014 18:01:35 GMT 10
Wonderful take on the prompt, love it!
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