anilaurel
Queen's Rider
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Post by anilaurel on Jul 16, 2009 3:18:42 GMT 10
Dedicated to Katty from the “Weird and Wonderful Pairings” thread
Title: Fathers Prompt: #6 Puzzles Rating: T Summary: Who is Kaddar's father?
Fazia sat next to her brother and husband at the banquet with baby Kaddar on her lap. Ozorne eyed the next-in-line with hidden distaste, tolerating the boy only for the sake of his ailing father, Muhassin.
Gazanoi played with Kaddar to keep him busy as the Princess scanned the crowd. The handsome, young mage, Arram, Ozorne's friend, smiled back at her and the child. She smiled back, Gazanoi and Arram were so similar there was no way to tell which was the prince's father .
Not that it mattered, Gazanoi was his father now. As far as he knew.
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Post by ubiquitous on Jul 16, 2009 6:36:50 GMT 10
Nicely done! I really like how it's in Fazia's POV, and the addition of Ozorne in there ^.^
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Post by Katty on Jul 16, 2009 11:42:01 GMT 10
Eeeee! I ♥ you
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