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Post by Seek on Jul 13, 2009 22:23:42 GMT 10
Title: Sphere Rating: G Prompt: #6, Puzzles Words: 100 words Summary: She thinks that if she tries, she could understand it. She hates mysteries, which is why she hates secrets. She likes all to be revealed.
It whirls fluidly across the floor, graceful spinning metal curves and arcs made to a specific equation that Numair has spoken to her and Daine about, although the meaning eludes her for now.
She thinks that if she tries, she could understand it. She hates mysteries, which is why she hates secrets. She likes all to be revealed.
It twirls about, catching the light, and she sees the mysterious curves that never end in an intricate pattern that lies at the edge of her perception. Now, the black fire holding it fades away.
Kit whistles, fascinated, and it revolves anew.
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Post by ubiquitous on Jul 13, 2009 23:10:24 GMT 10
Ooh, I really like this. I love the descriptiveness, and Kitten is absolutely adorable.
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aurorax
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Post by aurorax on Jul 14, 2009 0:01:41 GMT 10
Wow, a Kitten fic, I love it! I thought the first line was particularly wonderful, and how you mentioned the fact that Numair took the time to talk to her about it, even if she didn't really understand what he was saying- it creates a really sweet family dynamic between them that you don't always see.
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Post by Rosie on Jul 14, 2009 19:37:46 GMT 10
Another masterly piece from you - I completely adore this! I like the intelligence and inquistiveness you bring to Kitten's character.
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Post by Seek on Jul 18, 2009 18:20:15 GMT 10
Heh. My thanks to everyone for commenting xD
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Post by Verasque on Sept 9, 2009 15:27:55 GMT 10
This is spell-binding, and just so poetically written
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Post by greenie on Sept 9, 2009 20:12:45 GMT 10
I love this! Kitten is just so adorable, and you describe everything so well.
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Post by Seek on Sept 12, 2009 20:54:55 GMT 10
Thanks! XD
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