anilaurel
Queen's Rider
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Post by anilaurel on Jun 23, 2009 6:19:13 GMT 10
Title: Earth Rating: PG Prompt: #5 Word Count: 100 Summary: Even the earth can be broken
The land shuddered and thrashed, throwing men and animals alike off their feet. Blood red magic flowed from vicious hands making the earth buckle again. Houses fell, killing many peasants and lords. As though it hadn't suffered enough, blue magic pulled power out of the world. First vines, then ropes until they became sheets of power, not just from the land but plants too.
Men and women screamed in terror trying to get away from the damage of their livelihoods while the king still stole the last of the magic away.
The world would take a long time to recover.
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Post by Verasque on Jun 23, 2009 12:40:16 GMT 10
Besides the fact that Jon was somewhat glorified in this, I really loved the rawness you conveyed. Quite appropriate for your piece
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Post by ubiquitous on Jun 24, 2009 14:19:57 GMT 10
Nicely descriptive. Great drabble!
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