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Post by Verasque on Feb 9, 2010 21:40:14 GMT 10
Title: Cheat Rating:PG-13 Prompt: #21 Games Words: 150 Summary: He’s the eldest, she’s the youngest, and they’re two steps forward, one step back. WARNING: incest and squick. Notes: Kat and Ren. Enough said.
She saw the loathing in his eyes as soon as she opened hers. Fool, she berated herself, wondering when she had allowed herself that small hope for anything more. “Don’t start,” she warned, slipping out of his bed gracefully. His perfect, tense silence was reply enough.
“When will you grow up? This isn’t a game.” He looked away as she dressed, undoubtedly shamed by her youthful body and his reaction to it.
She let out a hollow laugh. “I might have started this, but you’re the one who continues it. Tell me: did it ever cross your mind to say no?”
His face contorted, recoiling. His words were even better. “All the time. But then the pity takes over.”
“Why?” she asked, her voice as strong as steel. “I might not be your precious Shinko, or your invicible Kally—but I’m still everything you’ve ever wanted, and can never have.”
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Post by Katty on Feb 9, 2010 21:42:23 GMT 10
!! Wow. Intense. I love it.
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Post by greenie on Feb 10, 2010 8:42:01 GMT 10
This is fantastic writing; I think you've captured all the emotions really well.
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Post by Verasque on Feb 10, 2010 15:39:32 GMT 10
Thanks guys!
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