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Post by Tamari on Apr 7, 2012 15:11:02 GMT 10
Title: Fuchsia Rating: G Prompt: #65, Cheaters Never Prosper Word Count: 150 Summary: Neal gets something unexpected when he attempts to take shortcuts. -:- Edging closer to the desk in the corner, he leaned forward, straining to see the slip of paper- and there- “Neal!” He jumped and banged his head on the rim of the table. Rubbing his aching scalp, Neal turned to glare at his fiancé. Yuki hastily unsnapped her fan to hide a smile. “That’s cheating,” she said, snatching the diagram from his fingers. “You told me you learned this dance in page training!” “I did,” he huffed. “I just forgot some steps. It’s complicated!” Her eyes crinkled. “Now you have to start over.” Neal groaned at Yuki’s no-nonsense stare. He started the steps, but she stopped him. “Here,” she said, handing him her hot pink fan, “Try it with this.” He gaped at her. “You’re not serious? This is-” “Yes, Neal?” “Nothing,” he said with a sigh. He should have known better than to try to cheat with Yuki around.
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sesquipedalian
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Post by sesquipedalian on Apr 7, 2012 15:17:42 GMT 10
Yes! I love glimpses of Neal/Yuki! And they are so perfect.
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hawksandfeathers
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Post by hawksandfeathers on Jan 24, 2013 10:13:54 GMT 10
Ughh, you wrote Neal/Yuki awesomely. "He groaned at Yuki's non-nonsense stare" - lol.
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