kiz
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Post by kiz on Apr 23, 2009 8:56:05 GMT 10
Title: Grape Expectations Rating: G Prompt: 3: Addiction Summary: Zek the marmoset overindulges at a party!
Zek ate a grape.
It wasn't his first grape of the evening, nor his last. Zek didn't like parties, with their flashy lights, smelly stuff, unfamiliar animals who might eat monkey. But parties had grapes! Nimbly, he picked up another fruit and admired it with solemn eyes.
Zek ate another grape.
How many grapes to eat? Zek didn't know. He wanted to find out. A gilded man whose hair made Zek sneeze chuckled, offered him a treat.
Zek ate another grape.
Now he was feeling sick. Sick, but not sated. Zek had eaten too much and yet...
Zek wanted another grape.
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Post by Lisa on Apr 23, 2009 9:36:46 GMT 10
I am personally relating to Zek more than I ever have before! This was delightful!
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Post by Katty on Apr 23, 2009 10:57:56 GMT 10
Ahahaha this is so cute! <3 Zek!
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Post by boosette on Apr 23, 2009 11:45:59 GMT 10
♥ Zek! He's adorable, and he's right - you can never have too many grapes!
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Rojo
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Post by Rojo on Apr 23, 2009 11:48:40 GMT 10
Aw, this makes me just adore Zek! (and remind me of the time I just could not stop eating the cherries...!)
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Post by anilaurel on Apr 24, 2009 11:23:16 GMT 10
OMG ZEK FIC I love zek, that was so great. You never see animals as having addictions. AWESOME
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Post by Anaroriel on Apr 27, 2009 16:57:27 GMT 10
Aww, adorable! ^^
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Post by rubberduck on Apr 28, 2009 0:32:47 GMT 10
Awwww, I used to love grapes so much! This is fabulous...
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Post by ubiquitous on Apr 28, 2009 8:32:08 GMT 10
Omg, so adorable!
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Post by k4writer02 on Apr 28, 2009 10:58:56 GMT 10
Great title, and great pov!
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