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Post by samantha on Apr 7, 2009 22:37:06 GMT 10
Title: Chuckle Rating: PG Prompt: #2 - Haunted Summary: A scene that was only ever spoken about in SOTL
“Let me go after her, I can take her down. I know I can,” Josiane begged of him.
His blue eyes were crinkled with amusement. Josiane couldn’t understand how a man had time to be amused at a moment like this.
“She’d be in that insufferable brother’s room, no doubt." Roger stroked his chin. "Frankly, I don’t think you can take her … but you’re most welcome to try.”
With that Roger let out a chuckle. It was that same chuckle that haunted Josaine as the axe sliced through Si-Cham. It was that chuckle she heard, constantly replaying in her mind, as she took her final breath lying on the floor of Thom’s chambers.
Even in death, Roger’s chuckle haunted her.
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Post by Katty on Apr 7, 2009 22:53:42 GMT 10
Ack. Creepy and powerful. I love it.
(And wooo, Roger!!!)
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Post by rainstormamaya on Apr 8, 2009 8:49:45 GMT 10
Scary! Roger and his evil chuckle. *shudders* I can see how that would haunt someone. You've got one typo- Josiane, not Josaine.
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Post by samantha on Apr 8, 2009 9:31:55 GMT 10
Thanks for the feedback! And thanks for pointing out the typo. At least I was consistent with my mistakes.
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Post by k4writer02 on Apr 8, 2009 11:17:22 GMT 10
oh, Josiane. Given what she did to Faithful, I can't say I've ever felt much sympathy for her, but this made me shiver
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Post by Lisa on Apr 8, 2009 13:27:13 GMT 10
I think this one works really well for me because I just assume that Roger is NOT haunting Josiane, she's just frickin' crazy.
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Post by ubiquitous on Apr 9, 2009 21:36:06 GMT 10
Ooh, creepy! But awesome. And yay for Josiane fic.
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Post by zbilja on Apr 13, 2009 16:58:59 GMT 10
Creepy! I'd also say she went a little mad, too - Roger chuckling in her ear all the time like that!
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Post by samantha on Apr 14, 2009 22:47:05 GMT 10
Thanks for the feedback
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