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Post by Verasque on Sept 12, 2009 22:11:10 GMT 10
Title: Traitorous Beating Thing Rating: G Prompt: #11 Race Words: 111 Summary: A race for independence makes the nation’s greatest hero want to become the first Lady Knight in over a century.
She was seven years old and shone brighter than the sun.
She strode through the crowds of the market fair with her proud chin up and her back straight; her large, hurried strides achieved only by a child of her dignity. Behind her, her twin held onto Maude’s hand like a wimpy baby goose, and Alanna of Trebond wanted nothing but to put distance between them out of embarrassment.
Yet, the annoying beating thing inside her chest was a traitor—it wanted her to stop being such a dooby and protect her brother from all the crooks in this world that dared want to harm his quiet and foolish, magic-filled head.
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Post by greenie on Sept 12, 2009 22:17:11 GMT 10
*squee* Little Alanna! I love little Alanna. This is so adorable!
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Post by Katty on Sept 12, 2009 22:19:20 GMT 10
Adorable!!!
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Post by theantichris on Sept 13, 2009 0:13:59 GMT 10
Wee!Alanna, squee! So cute.
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renegade
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Post by renegade on Sept 13, 2009 1:50:19 GMT 10
Wow, I love it!
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Post by Lisa on Sept 13, 2009 2:26:43 GMT 10
This is adorable. ^_^
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Post by ubiquitous on Sept 13, 2009 9:49:57 GMT 10
This is so cute!
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Post by Verasque on Sept 14, 2009 19:54:01 GMT 10
Glad you all think so Thanks a bunch, everyone!
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aurorax
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Post by aurorax on Sept 29, 2009 14:50:23 GMT 10
Oh, this is such a beautiful look at the young!twins, and I love the first sentence in particular, it seems like how Thom would describe Alanna. This made me want to hug little Thom.
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Post by Verasque on Oct 6, 2009 13:29:23 GMT 10
Thanks Ginger! I'm sure Thom would welcome a hug or two
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