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Post by Verasque on Aug 8, 2009 0:11:02 GMT 10
Title: Upright Rating: G Prompts: #5 Healing, #6 Puzzles Words: 100 Summary: Jon finds healing in the face of his parents' deaths. Note: An old drabble.
He struggles to stay upright and confident, like the sovereign he is suppose to be. In the past few days, he has gotten better at controlling his emotions. He can see that Gary, Raoul and all the people are in need of their King.
Yet now, as the red-haired woman stands in front of him after a year, determination and anger and sadness envelope him whole. He bends in half to fall into her arms and he breaks, but they both don't mind, because she is Alan and she is Alanna, and she can put him back together.
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Post by ubiquitous on Aug 8, 2009 10:30:51 GMT 10
Ooh, very nice. I love the descriptiveness
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Post by Katty on Aug 9, 2009 15:26:55 GMT 10
Aww this is so sweet And it is making my inner A/J fangirl fight for domination
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Post by Rosie on Aug 10, 2009 21:56:41 GMT 10
I think you awoke my inner A/J fangirl too! I simply love the last line of this.
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Post by aurorax on Aug 10, 2009 22:09:51 GMT 10
I agree, the last line is beautiful- I love how you captured their relationship, that she can be both Alan and Alanna, the lover and the best friend, all in one sentence. Quite impressive and artfully done.
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Post by wordy on Aug 10, 2009 22:19:32 GMT 10
Oh, I love it! I was never a big A/J shipper, but this is very tempting! Great work!
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Post by greenie on Aug 10, 2009 22:26:02 GMT 10
Aw, that's really sweet. I think it works with them just as best friends as well, like he just needs her there to help him through it. Like how George says it never felt right while they were on the outs with each other. I'm not explaining myself very well, but yeah. I like it.
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Post by Anaroriel on Aug 11, 2009 12:34:56 GMT 10
Ooh, lovely! Very sweet.
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Post by Verasque on Aug 11, 2009 13:04:37 GMT 10
Glad you all liked it Especially since, y'know, its my grand plan to convert all of you to AJism. Kidding!
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