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Post by Seek on Aug 5, 2009 21:08:37 GMT 10
Title: Bedfellows Rating: G Prompt: #8, Strange Bedfellows Words: 134 words Summary: They are strange bedfellows, he and she.
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When Briar wakes up in the night, gasping breath through clenched teeth so as not to scream, she is there. She says nothing, but sits with him, and together, they both fall asleep. This time, her body pressed against his, Briar doesn’t dream.
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When Sandry wakes up in the night, feeling the darkness close in on her, she nearly screams and panics in fright. She feels Briar’s warmth against the thin sheets, and settles down. This time, she falls asleep, snug against him, without dreams of unmagic and death.
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When they wake up in the morning, with the light streaming through open windows, Briar laughs off the terrors nightfall brings. Sandry threatens to let him sleep on his own or to short-sheet his bed. Lark and Rosethorn smile but say nothing.
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Post by wordy on Aug 5, 2009 21:23:45 GMT 10
Excellent!
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Post by ubiquitous on Aug 5, 2009 22:54:54 GMT 10
Ooh, this is wonderful!
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Post by Beara on Sept 15, 2009 9:59:31 GMT 10
I really like this pairing! I'm not sure if you intended it to be romantic or platonic, but I've always kind of seen a connection between Sandry and Briar- something romantic, maybe, even though a lot of people think that two people in the circle getting together is icky. I really- like this pairing. And the fic, of course! Very nice.
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Post by Verasque on Sept 15, 2009 22:09:37 GMT 10
Sweet and flowing
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Post by Seek on Sept 16, 2009 19:04:35 GMT 10
Thanks, guys! @beara: Actually, because I felt they had a connection, but could not quite describe the nature of it, I decided to leave it ambiguous So yeah, I don't think anyone could tell if it was romantic or platonic.
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Post by Beara on Sept 17, 2009 12:11:38 GMT 10
Yeah, I could tell that you did that, and I like it! But...I guess the idea of Sandry and Briar together has always really appealed to me for some reason, so I chose to take it as that- it's beautifully written, none the less.
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Post by Lisa on Oct 9, 2009 13:20:59 GMT 10
Oh, this is delightful.
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Post by darkakane on Nov 12, 2009 20:55:36 GMT 10
Wonderfully written!
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