brilyn
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Post by brilyn on Aug 4, 2009 13:22:48 GMT 10
Title: Limp Rating: PG13 Prompt: 8, Strange Bedfellows Words: 97 Note: This came from my entry for the Peculiar Pairings Fic-a-thon. Rosethorn demanded voice and she was the only one I could think of to get this kind of reaction. *** It was her first visit back to the Winding Circle after marrying Crane and Sandry’s first stop was Discipline Cottage. She was disappointed to find that Lark was not at the house, having gone out with one of the residents for the day. Instead, Sandry wandered around the house and found herself outside Rosethorn’s workroom where the woman was napping. Hesitating, Sandry nearly backed out when Rosethorn opened one eye. “What’s married life like with that limp Bag?” she asked tartly. Comfortable with this woman after many years, she replied wickedly, “Not all of him is limp.”
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Post by wordy on Aug 4, 2009 19:50:08 GMT 10
Cheeky! I love the idea of Sandry being comfortable enough with Rosethorn to joke like that! One suggestion though, I think you may need a comma after 'Crane' in the first sentence: it's a bit of a run-on, and I had to read it a few times before I figured out what you were saying. Great work!
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Post by ubiquitous on Aug 4, 2009 20:26:50 GMT 10
Hee. Gotta love Sandry. ^.^
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Post by Seek on Aug 4, 2009 21:55:35 GMT 10
LOL! Oh lovely, Sandry's getting naughty...
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